IELTS ライティング問題形式「Discussion Essay」の書き方

【解答例】

【イントロの例】
In recent years, it is quite common for young adults having a gap year during their school years or after graduating from school. A year break for the students has both positive and negative effects, which will be discussed in this essay. 

  このように問題文の言い換えと、エッセイのプランを述べます。

【BODY 1の例】
One of the advantages for this trend may involve the expansion of knowledge and experiences in that deciding to work or take a journey will give a broader view of life. Gaining experience abroad can also allow them to understand different cultures and ideas, which is particularly important in a diverse society we live in. Valuable working experience can give a sense of responsibility and understand their role in a team setting. Through these experiences, the young adults can have an opportunity to grow and be independent away from their family. 

 ここでは メリットを先に述べます。

【BODY 2の例】
On the other hand, the experience of taking a gap year can make the young lose their interest in continuing study because of enjoying their life. For example, if they start working, it is difficult to resign once they gain specific knowledge and skill required for the job. The financial remuneration is very attractive for young people who are eager to buy items in trend.  Moreover, they may face some problems in adapting academic environment after spending a lot of time in work. Therefore, they probably think that it is better to pursue a career in particular jobs or do something different which can make this life full instead of going back to their studies at school. 

 ボディー１で メリットを述べたので、ボディー２では デメリットを述べます。

【結論・まとめの例】
In conclusion, having time off for young adults can have both disadvantages and advantages. Valuable experience can be gained during the year, however, they may not wish to continue their studies once they experience working and earn salary. 

 まとめでは、問題文の言い換えと、ボディーで論じたメリットと デメリットを簡潔に述べて終わりにします。自分の意見は必要とされませんが、もし入れたい場合は結論に入れることができます。